September 3, 2008

What do you do?

When you're working as hard as you can

When you're giving all that you got

When your head says, 'I need a break man!'

What do you do?


When you feel like running away

When you feel like just giving up

When you can't take it for one more day!

What do you do?


When it becomes too much to take

When it becomes a pain in the neck

When you do it just for the sake

What do you do?


When it turns out to be fine after all

When the effort is not in vain

When you can be proud and stand really tall

What do you do?



When the day comes for me to be done

When I don't have to complain any more

When it's my turn to shine like the sun

What will I do?


I'll smile...and say it was all worth it

2 comments:

Mehta. said...

Ummm...
Well it's a decent concept...
Won't get into the technical aspect of it all...
The thing is...
The shift of the mood...
It wasn't really pulled off properly.
It could be so much more!
Think about it.
Refine the ideas within it.
I say you reconsider the last verse.
Maybe get rid of it altogether.

Aditi Minda said...

ok... not as good as the first one... but good efforts