When you're working as hard as you can
When you're giving all that you got
When your head says, 'I need a break man!'
What do you do?
When you feel like running away
When you feel like just giving up
When you can't take it for one more day!
What do you do?
When it becomes too much to take
When it becomes a pain in the neck
When you do it just for the sake
What do you do?
When it turns out to be fine after all
When the effort is not in vain
When you can be proud and stand really tall
What do you do?
When the day comes for me to be done
When I don't have to complain any more
When it's my turn to shine like the sun
What will I do?
I'll smile...and say it was all worth it
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Ummm...
Well it's a decent concept...
Won't get into the technical aspect of it all...
The thing is...
The shift of the mood...
It wasn't really pulled off properly.
It could be so much more!
Think about it.
Refine the ideas within it.
I say you reconsider the last verse.
Maybe get rid of it altogether.
ok... not as good as the first one... but good efforts
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