September 2, 2008

In Search of Sunrise

I am...

In search of sunrise...


I see it

When i look into her eyes...


Her eyes

Are all i can see...


I wonder

Where could she be?


When

Will i find her?


Tell her

that i love her...


Hold her

In my arms so...


I never

Have to let her go...


Always

Be by her side...


From her

I'll never have to hide...


I want

to spend with her all my lives...


I am...

In search of sunrise...

3 comments:

Mehta. said...

[:)]
Warm...
Punctuation re!
Get a bit of that into it...
Same technical flaws...

Aditya Mehta said...

dude lay off with the technical flaws crap
stop showing off your bigtime poetic skills
i write cuz i like to and i know theres technical flaws
you dont have to keep saying it in every comment

Aditi Minda said...

pretty romantic... emotional and of course, good.